With a low growl, he enters the room like a bear torn from
hibernation. Eyes still half-closed, he grumbles and stumbles his way toward
the scent of coffee. Ah, but what's this? Another aroma, promising sustenance
to the hungry beast. On a platter, like sacrifices strewn before a pagan god,
lay six donuts, their frosting pristine and untouched. With savage voracity, he
lunges for this new prey, grabbing two and promptly severing the first pieces
into a carnage of pastry and sugar.
I thought that it was a good analogy between your dad and a bear.
ReplyDeleteI like all of the descriptive words this was a good example about how I could write more descriptive words.
ReplyDeleteLOVE this!! Such great images.
ReplyDelete